I have been learning Show not Tell to make narrative interesting.
Israel's Learning Journey
Thursday, May 26, 2022
Thursday, May 12, 2022
How healthy are you?
in class we are learning what it means to be healthy. I learned that if you want to stay healthy you have to have a good diet, exercise, get good sleep and eat healthy food like fruit and vegetables.
Tuesday, May 3, 2022
stuck with my sisters baby
in class we had 40 minutes to write a story that happened in the weekend
and I was stuck at home with my sister and her baby
I was just at home doing nothing, really just watching tv. But my older sister said I have to watch her baby
While she goes to the toilet and. She took for very long time then I started to get a little bit annoyed
But the baby started to cry so she had to hurry up
And she finally came out to feed her but it was just
Us home because everyone was at my brothers rugby game but it was almost dinner time so we just had
Boil up from last night it was so good so then i just
Went back to watching watching tv then everybody
Came back and took the tv to watch movies all night
And then just played on my phone for the rest of the
Night and nothing else exciting happened.
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